This whole story and those sections in particular, walk the line
of
grace from edge to edge.
Is that a good
thing?
If I may be so bold, I would recommend you rewrite the first
chapter
from Willow POV, in the height of her magical arrogance and the
quick
death of it with Buffy's admission.
That's a great idea! I
never would have thought about it. Thank you. I don't want to
break the flow of the story right now, so I'll have to go back and do it after
I've finished it.