I can honestly say I have rarely ever read a more miserable piece of
shit. The dialogue is terrible, the characterizations are WAY off
base (has Angel - not Angelus - ever told a dirty joke?), and it reads
like a cheetah on a pogostick. Not to mention the spelling and grammar.
GAH! Looked like someone with dyslexia was sitting at the keyboard
(I have a friend with that condition, and my heart goes out to him every
time he writes a poem... beautiful stuff, but he beats himself up when
someone has trouble reading it). The person that wrote this should
find a dictionary and read it cover to cover before even going near a keyboard
again.
This was my impression after re-reading what was my original one-shot version of Soul Mating. And, somehow, three weeks later, I was working on Intervention. The differences in style floored me. It looked like someone else wrote it. For anyone who liked the teaser and was looking forward to more, expect a bit more of a delay. I was thinking another week to polish it up, but at this point, I'm hoping it'll be ready in two.
So, if I don't review a fic and send praise where it might be due, forgive me. I'm trying to correct some horrible mistakes I've made.
Phoen Dusk (who is needs a new pen from all the alterations he made)