Re: [buffywantswillow] FF Nka part eight

["Quindo Ma" <quindo.ma@xxxxxxxxx>]

Alright. I had intended to send out one big mail, with all the feedback to the stories that I had neglected the past two months, which will also include your 'Keeper of the Stars' and NKA 7.

But then, I saw this part in my mailbox, and read it. And now after readingit, I just can't keep myself from replying directly to this part, and thatfor a very good reason.

Please don't take this wrong, but there are times when you don't seem to beable to grasp all the fine ways to write a story. In such cases, I have found that some avoidable mistakes have been made. But EVERY WRITER has thosetimes, and they are NOT avoidable.

But in this part, you have once again been touched by the muse.
It was absolutely beautiful. You managed to capture everything in the way that makes it a perfect read. The last time I can remember reading such a wonderful piece from you, was part 6 of NKA, where you wrote the love scene. And here again, you phrased the sentences, the paragraphs, the whole story in fact, so beautiful, that I feel you should take your time, and a short brake from your current stories, and write a few short stories around such situations. :-)

It's hard for every writer to find the right words at times, and it's even harder to find words better than the right ones, but you simply brought it together here and, even though I had to look up some of the words in my english/german dictionary (I still have to do that sometimes :-), I have to say that you have truly surpassed yourself again with this.

Keep up the great work, and honor us with a few other such marvelous stories.

Quin


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