RE: [buffywantswillow] FF: Stages.

["Parise, Charles" <charles.parise@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

> Authour's Notes: I've been working on this for a good while, never quite
happy with the 
> result. I would really appreciate feedback on this one, either positive
or negative. I'll 
> give the first person who recognizes the pattern of this installment a
shiny Canadian 
> e-nickel which is worth exactly one dot of ink on an American dollar.

Hey Fool,

I think one thing that sticks out is that if someone who has not read
earlier parts of your story were to read this they would be hopelessly lost.
You need to indicate that this is one story amidst a larger tale: give it a
series title or something. The adding a summary of what has gone before
might be nice, especially on a part like this.

Having said that, I am enjoying this little story and look forward to future
installments being posted very soon.

And yes I recognize the first two of the "5 Stages of Death"

Chazzman