Re: [buffywantswillow] ff:Becoming Real Part 4

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Carol,
A truly great chapter, and the next one should be even more interesting.

Your portrayal of the cops was excellent, and you did a very good job of
showing how this rather eclectic group handles emergencies. 

When you had Willow show up, and tell Buffy to stop beating up the nice
doctors and nurses, cracked me up (for reasons far to complicated to go
into now).

Keep up the good work, 

I'm getting the bucket of ice and the cold shower ready for your next
chapter.

Take care.

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, 
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash, 
part time trouble making badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
and holy spook)
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Don't sweat the petty things --- Pet the sweaty things.
~A~
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Ya'all keep me occupied...I am having a real good time.
~Belle Starr~ ("The Long Riders")
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.