RE: [buffywantswillow] ff:Becoming Real Part 3 & 4

["Parise, Charles" <charles.parise@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Carol,
I've said it before and I'll say it again. I love this story. You have
created an absolutly wonderful character with Duncan. Her reactions to
situations are hysterical:

< And if the urge to do that wasn't bad enough, she also wanted to hunt
bugs in the office. She knew somewhere in the office there were a couple of
cockroaches or at least a spider. >

and you have created a great group of secondary characters. I'm really
looking forward to seeing what Frank and Martha's reactions are when they
find out the truth about Buffy & Co. 

One thing though, with all the money Buffy seems to have I would think she
would have a high power attorney on retainer for all the trouble she gets
into. He would have had her out of the hospital in a flash.

Chazzman

PS I can't remember if I fed back on it but I also was thrilled to see the
new chapter on Willow: CIA