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So, what's new with recent fics?

Kimber! Nice mini-scene between Laurel and Lisa in your "Roads" interlude. But you finally got Willow awake and alert, it's time to get her back together with Buffy. 'Kay?

Shyfox! Loving "Stranger In My House". Good to see Buffy struggling to remember, and knowing that Willow is the key to her memory. And you captured the emotions well, as usual. Hope to see more, stat.

Sam I Am! "Dark Horizons", some pretty dark stuff, but damn sexy as well. Can't wait for the sequel(totally unrelated thought; has anyone out there ever seen a movie with a female vampire who wasn't either bi or lesbian? Just wondering.). And I enjoyed the final chapter of "Realms" Book One. Waiting for more.

Tony McD! "Trinity's Child" continues to rock the Southern Hemisphere! What I like, apart from the Buffy/Willow/Xander interaction and the high-tech feel, is the predictions you make about the future; China attacking L.A., the various future technologies that seem more practical and realistic than a lot of sci-fi I've read, Kathy Freeman, a celebrity of the Sydney Olympics, as a political figure. Very imaginative, and now that we've met this new Slayer, and convinced her to defect, I see where the plotline's going to pick up a little. Can't wait to see where you take us with this.

Angelina! "Time for Revenge"! Great rethink of the second season. I can see Willow trying to avenge Buffy's injuries at Angelus's hands, only to get in over her head. Oh, I read a similar story, also Buffy/Angel related, that was just archived at Pink Rabbit's site; www.altfic.com. It's called "Passion", and takes place around the episode 'Passion' in Season Two, but an alternate timeline. It's a good read, but be warned in advance; something truly nasty happens to Willow. That's all I'm gonna say about that. Oh, and I also loved "Girls Interrupted". Laughed my ass off!

Femvamp! "The Story" is back! And you even got to my all-time favorite episode of the series, "Dopplegangland"! Some of the best Willow material is here, and I loved how you showed how Willow's experience with Vamp Willow gets her to thinking about things she never thought before. Can't wait to see how you handle her relationship with Tara, as well as her later relationship with Buffy.

Soren! A satisfying ending to the Fables series, but I'd like to see a later story where Buffy and Willow meet up with Cordy later, and give her a knowing look. Hopefully, this won't be the last we read of yours. C'mon, don't ignore the muse when she calls.

Pat Kelly! YES! "Scoobies 2008" borders on greatness! Seeing how the Scoobs do in the future promises to reveal more about them then ever before. What's up with Willow and Tara? Will Faith ever tell Buffy the truth? What evil will Ethan unleash? And where's Riley? (Okay, you don't have to answer that one, we can live without him.) You've started something major here, don't stop now!

Anne-Lise! A new bard enters our happy family. And talk about your auspicious debuts! "Converging Slayers" starts with an intriguing premise, an intriguing new character in Kyoko, and some sexy Buffy/Willow action for good measure. One question though; just where is Tara? Willow didn't seem to be too worried about her barging in while she was getting naked and sweaty with Buffy. Also, loved the note exchange at the end. Was that an original poem that Willow sent Buffy, or was that one of Sappho's works?

That's all I can think of for now. Back at you later,
Kirayoshi



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