Re: Feedback-A-Gogo!

[annelise@xxxxxxxxxxxxx]

--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxx, Jim_D_Means@p... wrote:

> Anne-Lise! A new bard enters our happy family. And talk about 
your auspicious debuts! "Converging Slayers" starts with an 
intriguing premise, an intriguing new character in Kyoko, and some 
sexy Buffy/Willow action for good measure. One question though; just 
where is Tara? Willow didn't seem to be too worried about her 
barging in while she was getting naked and sweaty with Buffy. Also, 
loved the note exchange at the end. Was that an original poem that 
Willow sent Buffy, or was that one of Sappho's works?

Auspicious I can live with. :> In my universe (watashi wa kami-sama 
desu!) Tara has left, reasons to be explained later, hence the 
unhappy Willow in my story. I'm going to cover that and Giles 
hopefully in the next part. (If anyone actually likes the first one) -
Also Kyoko's entry into Sunnydale. The poetry passed by Willow to 
buffy at the end was written by me; I am but a point in a field of 
lights in comparison to Sappho.