Re: FF: Triad chpt4

[Jim Means <Jim_D_Means@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Sam wrote:
> Riley took a huge gulp of air and terror filled his face as he stood 
> in the doorway.  His knuckles grew white as he tightly clenched the 
> door knob, "I h-have b-bad news."
>
> "I know!  You have failed our keeper," Hissed the black Knight as two 
> skeleton warriors rushed into the room and secured Riley.
>
> TBC…..
The only mistake you're making here is to let the Keeper have all the fun
torturing Riley.  Once they're done with him, I hope there's enough of him
left for Buffy, Willow and Tara to have a crack at him.  ::laughs diabolically::

Another fine job, but you do seem to be falling into a pattern; how often
is it that Buffy has to find her true love to save the world?  Oh well, I'm
enjoying this one immensely.  Great villains, big battle scenes, major relationships,
Beefstick torture, who could ask for anything more?

Kirayoshi

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