That you let Faith pass on was disappointing, but if it is necessary for
your work then I have no quarrel. The set up is nice, but nothing
in the fic scared me as much as quote at the end. Having read and
loved that particular novel, I'm a little scared as to the possible influence
it might have on your Fic. Just no flaming Porches, okay?
Oh, and the suspense between chapters is an homage to Joss... we just don't have access to commercials. Phoen Dusk
"God does not play dice with the universe; He plays an ineffible game of His own devising, which might be compared, from the perspective of all the other players(ie., everybody), to being involved in an obscure and complex version of poker in a pitch-dark room, with blank cards, for infinite stakes, with a Dealer who won't tell you the rules and who smiles all the time." |