Feedback:: Slayer Forever 2/?

[cilia@xxxxx]

I'm back again,

Feedback on Slayer Forever (2) by Steven Williams.

The story in general was very good, with scenes that played 
themselves out nicely and pleasant visual imagery especially when 
Buffy took the sword down from the wall. 

Amanda is up to par, her personality reflecting the one portrait in 
the cannon. The scene between Buffy and Willow was sweet and you 
somehow conveyed a lot of emotion through that scene which I find 
pleasing.

No fault could be found with this piece of the story, I'm glad I can 
say that and wish I could always say it. Keep up the excellent pace 
you have set here and I look forward to future installments and 
flashback scenes.

Cilia





--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "Steven Williams" <garrek42@y...> wrote:
> Slayer Forever
> By Steven Williams
> Disclaimer: I own nothing except for an exceptional amount of debt 
for a man my age.