Re: ::Feedback:: Slayer Forever 2/?

["Steven Williams" <garrek42@xxxxxxxxx>]

Wow praise. This is wierd. I happen to hate what I write, I guess cause I love to read and be suprised. Anyway it still feels wierd to read that a person, or people like what I wrote. I know, some of you ask why post it if you think it sucks. Ther answer is simple, what the hell else am I going to do with hte jusk in my head? Anyway, Cillia, feel free to write letters likethis to me anytime, cause it feeds my ego, which in most respects is without measure, knowing no restraint of time or space. Unfortunately feeding the beast takes a lot of my day, so when anyone helps it frees me up to write, or work, or what have you.
TTFN
Steven

-------Original Message-------

From: cilia@xxxxx
Date: 09 avril, 2001 14:32:44
To: buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: ::Feedback:: Slayer Forever 2/?

I'm back again,

Feedback on Slayer Forever (2) by Steven Williams.

The story in general was very good, with scenes that played 
themselves out nicely and pleasant visual imagery especially when 
Buffy took the sword down from the wall. 

Amanda is up to par, her personality reflecting the one portrait in 
the cannon. The scene between Buffy and Willow was sweet and you 
somehow conveyed a lot of emotion through that scene which I find 
pleasing.

No fault could be found with this piece of the story, I'm glad I can 
say that and wish I could always say it. Keep up the excellent pace 
you have set here and I look forward to future installments and 
flashback scenes.

Cilia





--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "Steven Williams" <garrek42@y...> wrote:
> Slayer Forever
> By Steven Williams
> Disclaimer: I own nothing except for an exceptional amount of debt 
for a man my age.



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