Re: Fic: Prisms-Red 2/2

[shadowmage_draco@xxxxxxx]

Totally amazing update. I absolutely loved it and hung on every word.

The way to switched back and forth between the different POVs was most cool.
By the time You got to Buffy and Willows confrontation of the rapist my
heart was pounding Willow's revelation of her truth, Buffy losing her self in
her rage and desire to protect Willow at all cost and Willow being able to stop
her from becoming a murder, it was totally amazing.

You did a excellent job at capturing everyone's emotions. Spikes bad guy
reaction to the whole thing is splendid. I can barely wait to see the next
parts and what that confrontation leads to, what will happen because of spikes
actions, and where will this lead Buffy and Willow, and how will that night
effect all the other scoobs. I can't wait to see what you have in store next.

-- 

Just the other day
I was walking by myself
Little kids at play
Old man talking to himself
I went outside to get a drink
Sat down by the door to think
Out of the corner of my eye
Caught a glimpse of the superspy
When he saw me look his way
He jumped down that alley way

Then I saw that man
In his black suit and cadillac
Suckin' on a lollipop


--Save Ferris

Sam

Shadowmage, Dark Jedi Master, High priest of Mayhem, Shades wearing
Koala, Thief of the woods out back, tormentor and corruptor at large,
supporter of the bards, fundraising representive of the GBWNS,
chairman of the directorate of Nonsensical Mayhem, Offical guide to 
the edge of insanity, Jungle juice smuggler, Member of the hand of 
Choas carldholder #2.

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