Feedback//FIC: Warrior... Slayer (1-5/?)

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Shadow,
One word, magnificent, this is an amazing story that you have going
here. All the characters are meshing perfectly and the idea of Willow
being the long lost daughter of Hephaestus (my favorite god BTW) and
Aphrodite, absolutely a perfect touch. 

I can see the parentage showing she gets her creativity and intelligence
from her father and her capacity for compassion and her friendly nature
from her mother.

Good job and great writing, now it's time to get back to your little
keyboard and get to work, or the Barney and Tellatubbies 8 hour special
tapes and play them on a continuous loop until you write more or die of
a terminal overdose, or turn purple and some strange thing sprouts from
your head, and you sing sickeningly sweet little ditties.<hehehe><beg>
TTFN

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, 
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash, 
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
The Middle Finger of The Hand of Chaos,
and the Yin to Shadow's Yang.)
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Laissez les bon temps roulez!!!!!
............................
{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.