Feedback:: Walking into Darkness

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Sorta the end of part 1? This can't be the end. Oh nononono you just
can't leave us here! We must have more, quickly quickly, chop chop, stat
even!<eg>

Very good start and the emotions going through both characters was well
done. The only thing I didn't like was it was just too darn short!]:-)

Excellent work keep it up and send us more soon, pleeeeeease.
TTFN

Later
Alex
(Unofficial Village Idiot, 
undercover gutter-dwelling scooter-trash, 
part time trouble making were-badger,
Semi-retired Scooter Tramp,
The Middle Finger of The Hand of Chaos,
and the Yin to Shadow's Yang.)
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Laissez les bon temps roulez!!!!!
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{Proud Member}... BtVS Writers Guild....because Fiction makes anything
possible.