Re: FF: Kryptonite (7/?)

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Ah, definitely a good chapter. Heavier on the B/W then the F/Adr 
(which isn't bad really considering this is a b/w list) it got into 
more of the core of the characters. Your writing style has certainly 
continued to improve, and it's nice to see more smooth narration than 
what was in the beginning. I can't wait to read more about the Clark 
and Lois's visit, and exactly what shock value Faith is planning on 
excersizing (or hopefully exorcizing) around Mack's parentals. 
A few questions about continuity, I can't remember the exact spot I 
was looking at, but it raised questions about what timeline we're 
on... oh, I believe it said Adriene was adopted right after Clark and 
Lois's marriage. That would put them around nearly 50, is that the 
case? Or was the marriage thing a mistype, and Adriene spent her 
time on Paradise island and moved in with Lois and Clark when she was 
older after they were married?

Thanks for listening,

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--- In buffywantswillow@y..., "C Ortiz" <ortiz_c4021@h...> wrote:
> Title:	Kryptonite (7/?)
> 
> Author: Carmen