Re: FIC: Betrayed

[BillGopher <asagiri@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Gator,
      I have one word for this fic, "WOW", very dark and very well done!
Hope to see more from you.

Bill Gopher

ghrdr@xxxxxxxxx wrote:
>  Title - Betrayed
> Author - GHRDR  <GHRDR@xxxxxxxxx>
> Disclaimer - "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" and all its characters belong 
> to Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy, Inc. plus UPN
> Author Note - This is what happens when my muse gets a case of the 
> depresses
> Pairing - N/A
> Rating - PG-13 for language and angst
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>
> Betrayed
> by GHRDR
>
>
>       Willow leaned back in the tub trying to get comfortable in 
> the warm water. Tears flowed down her face as she took a drink from 
> the wine bottle trying to warm the empty place inside of her soul. 
> The redhead idly added a bit more warm water to the tub while 
> thinking of the single word that described her young life: Betrayed.
>
>       The first and foremost betrayal had been from her parents. 
> Ira and Sheila Rosenberg had betrayed a child's trust in their 
> parents. Vacations and business trips had always came first for them. 
> When their only child had needed their love and support both had been 
> figuratively and literally missing.
>
>       Then Xander had betrayed their friendship. He would ask her 
> for advice, then promptly forget or ignore it completely. He hurt her 
> again and again by chasing anything female: be it mummy, mantis, 
> bitch or ex-demon. The final hurt had been when he kept putting down 
> her magical abilities. 
>
>       After Xander, the next one to betray her was Oz. Oz had 
> betrayed her trust. After talking to him a couple of times she 
> realized she had been betrayed before that morning in the crypt. Oz 
> had broken dates with her so he could meet with Miss She-wolf to 
> supposedly learn about the wolf inside. All he learned, in all those 
> hours, was her favorite position was doggy style.
>
>       Willow took another drink of the wine as her thoughts took 
> her to Tara. Tara, the one person who Willow truly believed was her 
> one true love. They had had a small fight and Willow had gone to calm 
> down. When she returned a couple of hours later she found Tara in a 
> passionate embrace with another girl. With her heart shattering at 
> this betrayal she had calmly gathered her things and had gone to 
> Buffy's.
>
>       Fate proved to be the ultimate betrayer because it had taken 
> Buffy from her. Buffy had been there through all the other betrayals 
> helping Willow to rise above them and mend her broken heart. Buffy 
> had given Willow comfort, support and love never asking for anything 
> in return. Just when Buffy and her had started to allow the 
> attraction between them to grow into something more, Buffy had been 
> killed. Buffy had defeated Glory but not before sustaining mortal 
> wounds herself. Buffy had called Willow over to where she was lying 
> and kissed the Wiccan with the last of her strength and love.
>
>       That had been two weeks ago. Everything was now in order and 
> it was time to move on. As Willow relaxed into the warmth, a last 
> thought drifted through her mind, "I'm coming to you My Love.. My 
> Buffy". The silence was betrayed as a drop of Willow's blood fell 
> from her wrist to the floor....
>
>
>
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