Ref: Feedback from Mad Hamlet

["David A. Knapton" <belgin_tei@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thank you for your feedback????????

Sorry about the above but I couldn't resist.

You made quiet a few points about 'Guardians'.

1, The spelling of the title if you read the actual title, not the 
posting header, you will see that it is spelt correctly the header 
was just a typo.

2, No I freely admit I did not use a beta.

3, As for the over use of '?' most of that would have been because of 
the spell/grammar checker.

4, Riley is in the story for a good reason? He came, He saw, He'll be 
back.

5, My relaying the erotic possibilities of the three girls. I total 
deny this if that is the impression I apologise. But the bond is 
supposed to be sexual in nature.

6, 'Talking heads'. Ok I assume you are only talking about 'how' 
which in some cases could have been explained better? The who (ok I 
did write it) should be fairly easy to follow.

7, It was proof-read by me, I decide for good or bad to leave most 
of '?' in the story.

8, There will be one or more parts.

A final note.

I write my stories for me and me alone, but decided to let others see 
them in the last few months so don't worry your comments will not 
stop me writing.

Bright Blessings

Dave