Re: FIC: Six blipverts (tm MBTV) in search of a home.

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

I'm not sure, but I think the formatting got a
little messed up in the delivery of this. Most
paragraphs were on the left, but one or two of
them were on the right as well.

That aside, the words flowed together pretty
well, but the storyline was hard to follow. 
Everything was kind of vague, and at times I
wasn't sure who's POV it was. 

Of course, maybe I wasn't able to follow so
easily because of the formatting. This is the
second fic in two days I've read on this list
that seemed to have formatting problems, and I'm
wondering if it's happening to everyone else,
too? Is it something on Yahoo's end? 

Kris


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