Re: Fic: Death Becomes Her

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

Glad I could sort of help. :)

Kris

--- soph melc <sophmelc@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> 
> > >Willow drops her pen and walks over to the
> > >Slayer?s body. During that short
> > >walk she thinks over everything that
> happened
> >
> >For some reason, those two sentences sound
> funny
> >to me. Should they maybe be written in the
> past
> >tense
> 
> hey thanks for the feedback, and the c&c. but
> in this bit its not the past 
> tense i was using, its the present still,
> however the writting has gone from 
> the first to the third person, which is why you
> might have thought the tense 
> should change.
> 
> 
> and oops..hehehe...your right...heheh thanks
> for pointing it out...
> 
> sophmelc
> 
> 
>
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