>Willow drops her pen and walks over to the >Slayer?s body. During that short >walk she thinks over everything that happened For some reason, those two sentences sound funny to me. Should they maybe be written in the past tense
hey thanks for the feedback, and the c&c. but in this bit its not the past tense i was using, its the present still, however the writting has gone from the first to the third person, which is why you might have thought the tense should change.
and oops..hehehe...your right...heheh thanks for pointing it out... sophmelc _________________________________________________________________ Get your FREE download of MSN Explorer at http://explorer.msn.com/intl.asp