Re: FIC: Forever

[Kris <krismpy@xxxxxxxxx>]

A very fun read! :) I'm confused as to why both
SMG and AH were transported to the other
dimension/reality, as opposed to just Buffy and
not Willow in the other?

I liked Riley's comment about wet t-shirt
contest. Sounded like he was kinda cranky about
not getting Buffy.

The story played out nicely even though it was
somewhat predictable. You might want to check
whether you meant 'loose focus' or 'lose focus'
in the first part of the story. I think you used
it twice, if I remember correctly.

Again, lots of good, funny fun! And I wish we'd
get something like the end at an award ceremony. 
:)

Kris 


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