Re: Anne-Lise

[Phoen Dusk <Dusk@xxxxxxxxx>]

You were hoping to elicit AN emotion? I went from warm, to boiling, to
numb. Now everyone is going to want to beat me over the head with large
blunt objects. Darlin', when I asked for you to flesh this out, I didn't
mean to have someone flay themselves open.

I stand by my earlier statement. This is a level of skill most writers try to attain for a great deal of their lives. You're there (and then some) now in my opinion. If the rivets are holding, get someone to strap your muse to your lap and let the inspiration flow through you and carry you to the pinnacle of this craft. Do you have any idea of how long it's been since I saw/heard someone use the word "sybaritic" and in the correct context?! I don't even want to think about the number of people you had to send to dictionaries!

Please. Do. Not. Stop (long term - feel free to take a break and let some folks get the blodd flowing again).

Phoen Dusk