Re: FF: Thoughts Of Trust

["soph melc" <sophmelc@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Seeing as everybody is on a big feedback, c/c hype at the moment i thought 
i'd jump on board...

firstly i liked the idea behind this fic, it was really good. i liked the 
writing too... but i think that it needed a little bit of beta reading. 
there were some grammar and spelling mistakes in there which really 
interrupted the flow of an other wise good story. but that little quibble 
aside it was good. looking forward to the other characters points of view.

keep writing!!

sophmelc

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