Re: Re: A Journey of a Thousand Miles (Stuck in a Moment)

[JDMeans@xxxxxxx]

In a message dated 12/18/01 11:58:26 AM Pacific Standard Time, 
debvii@xxxxxxxxx writes:

> 1) What Dan said; 

Yep, what he said.

2) the "foster sister" label threw me off (something about it > doesn't feel 
> quite right); 
> 
Well, they're closer than just friends, right?

3) will you work Xander the long-lamented > best friend into the story; 

Yes, Xander and Anya will figure in the story. Willow's gonna need all the 
friends she's got, and they're gonna be there for her.

4) the drug abuse metaphor is still making > me quite insane, but the 
> benefits of a good S6 B/W fic outweigh that 
> cost...i think <g>; 

Yes, but is it just a drug abuse metaphor? Could be more than that...

5) I like that you worked in Buffy's & Will's > acknowledgement of the major 
> reason Willow took up magick and its 
> benefits; 

And that reason will figure prominently in the rest of my story, be assured.

and 6) YAY!

And thanks.

Kirayoshi


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Grateful, he made a gift to me of these few precious words: 
If you find yourself on a cliffside, trapped, 
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and a hungry tiger waiting below, 
and by chance you spy a single strawberry 
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pluck the strawberry... 
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