Re: [WillowFemslash] FF: The Lost City Of Atlantis: Chapter One

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Aeris,

Well, this looks like a rollicking ride. Poor Will, she gets to the
point where she isn't even tempted to use magic, and now she gets turned
into a were-panther :o

Nice to see the astral projection bit, with Dawn being as self-centered
as ever :) I guess we'll see if Buffy really is back to normal, becaue
the Buffy I know would never stay away, no matter what Willow told her
to do. 

And I enjoyed "Francie" 's appearance, but your betareader did seem to
come down with a case of the "gremlins", since to my knowledge, Veronica
was not a werewolf. Or if she was, Archie, Jughead, Betty and Reggie
never said a word about it.

(Okay, that's nitpicky. I only mentioned the typo because it made me
laugh. Plus, knowing you, you'll now start a "Willow goes to Riverdale"
fic :) )

As ever, I want more.

Dan