Re: [WillowFemslash] FF: The Lost City Of Atlantis: Chapter One

["aeris3996" <aerisjade@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., danspector@w... wrote:
> Aeris,
> 
> Well, this looks like a rollicking ride. Poor Will, she gets to the
> point where she isn't even tempted to use magic, and now she gets 
turned
> into a were-panther :o

And it only gets worse.
> 
> Nice to see the astral projection bit, with Dawn being as self-
centered
> as ever :) I guess we'll see if Buffy really is back to normal, 
becaue
> the Buffy I know would never stay away, no matter what Willow told 
her
> to do. 

Now that is a surprise, but me and Francie have it all mapped out. 
< Winks >
> 
> And I enjoyed "Francie" 's appearance, but your betareader did seem 
to
> come down with a case of the "gremlins", since to my knowledge, 
Veronica
> was not a werewolf. Or if she was, Archie, Jughead, Betty and 
Reggie
> never said a word about it.
> 

< Cocks head > Uh, wasn't Veronica that girl in the band with Oz, 
that caused Oz/Willow to break up?

> (Okay, that's nitpicky. I only mentioned the typo because it made 
me
> laugh. Plus, knowing you, you'll now start a "Willow goes to 
Riverdale"
> fic :) )

Nope. Because I hav no knowledge of the Archer universe.

> 
> As ever, I want more.
> 
> Dan