RE: FF: Love, Pain, and Fear 1/? ...

["Stefan Akerblom" <nagarek@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

From: "angel_fire1505" <angel_fire1505@y...> 
Date: Sat Apr 20, 2002 1:25 pm
Subject: FF: Love, Pain, and Fear 1/? ...

>Hi my name is Angel, I'm new here and really shy about my writings.
>Here's my story, and please give me feedback so I know if I suck or
>not. Please be honest too. Thanks. 

Hiya Angel.

See, told you that you'd get good feedback, the people on this list
won't let you down.

I personally liked the idea about Buffy being able to wrestle with
the demon inside herself, that maybe she's still maintained at least a
vestige of her humanity. According to the canon Buffy legend of how a
vampire takes over, the soul leaves the dying body and the demon moves
in, maybe the slayer's able to hang on and not lose her soul, because
she IS the slayer. I definitely think you need to take this further, we
need to know now how Buffy and Willow will deal with what Buffy did to
herself, and see if there's redemption or if Willow is going to accept
Buffy as she is now, or if she is willing to pay the ultimate price to
be with Buffy. Well done, hope to see more of this. And keep in touch.

Stefan Akerblom
nagarek@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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