RE:FF: Love, Pain, and Fear 1/? ...

[jeepy91@xxxxxxx]

Hi there Angel Fire, and welcome to the list :)

A nice start to a concept that is quite intriguing. I really liked the way 
you revealed that Buffy was a vamp to Willow, having her follow her gaze to 
the mirror and not seeing any reflection. I could just picture the look of 
horror on Willow's face at seeing that her best friend had been turned. Very 
angsty stuff. And I can definitely see Will blaming herself, so it was nice 
that you through in Buffy telling her not to.

Anyway, nice beginning, can we hope to see more soon?

Casandra
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Buffy:"I could wrestle naked in grease for a living and still be cleaner than 
after a shift at the Doublemeat."
Willow:"Plus, I'd visit you at work every single day."
-'Normal Again' Shooting Script