re: Feedback: FF: Seeing Red

[aerisjade@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

> More please! I like this very much. Maybe a bit more description of 
> the characters and their feelings. Buffy and Willow have been so 
> disconnected this season, maybe a sentence on Buffy's thoughts about 
> that and her worry over Willow.
> 
> More!
> 
> Hunter
> 


Thank you, madam. Oh right, I knew I forgot to do something. 
Although maybe I should hold out until I see the next part of
Fallen, or maybe the third book in the red moon series. 

Aeris Jade Orion

Grey Fox, and cause of Discord.

Gabrielle: "Do you deny spying on these women?"
Joxer: "I resent that."
Gabrielle: "Do you deny it?"
Joxer: "No, I just _resent_ it."

Joxer: Hello--heh-heh-- name's Joxer-- spelled, uh [Clears throat]--
J-o-x-e-rrrrrrrr. 

Rh: "Would you wanna make a baby with me?"
Jox: "What?!"
Rh: "Will you help?"
Jox: "Wait a minute! You want me to-- to-- to-- make a-- "
Rh: "Right-- will you?"
Jox: "Of course not! Hey, listen! We're not just machines, you
know, you can use to-- . Besides-- you know, uh-- we can't just
do it on command. We need stuff like, uh-- cheap motel rooms and
dirty pictures and lingerie-- stuff like that! We're _not_
animals! But I can get those things!"