Re: FF Children of the Earth (2/10)

[jeepy91@xxxxxxx]

In a message dated 5/18/2002 11:10:21 PM Eastern Standard Time, 
willowxbvsb@xxxxxxxxxxx writes:


> It’s my attempt at humor, mixed in with kink, and sprinkled with a 
> bit of angst.
> 



And a very good one at that :) Loved the Buffy humor in there, you write 
Buffy first person very well. Loved how you had Buffy set Dawn straight 
without being too harsh that it was out of character. And having Buffy think 
that Willow didn't want her was a nice bit of angst, I could see where Buffy 
was coming from. But I also could sympathise with Willow, so it was nicely 
done. And way to get the Spike problem out of the way fairly early in the 
storyline. Willow's reaction was just as I would think. Surprised, but 
accepting because she loves Buffy.  

Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for the next part. Sounds 
like Warren is up to his evilly tricks. Loving this story :)

Casandra
~~~~~~~
Buffy:"I could wrestle naked in grease for a living and still be cleaner than 
after a shift at the Doublemeat."
Willow:"Plus, I'd visit you at work every single day."
-'Normal Again' Shooting Script
    


 
    





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