Re: FF Children of the Earth (2/10)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Willow X,

Whoa! After chapter 1, I was expecting more romance and angst and maybe
some hot loving or plot twists. What I wasn't expecting was for you to
make me laugh so long and so hard. I mean, we're talking insane
cackling here. (Granted, part of that may simply be due to my being
somewhat unbalanced, but the fic was damn funny)

>From Buffy accidentally tossing Willow out of bed to the concept of
orgasm-induced temporary blindness (so I guess what Buffy was saying was
that if Willow masturbates she'll go blind, huh? Gosh, my dad was
right!) to the identification of Andrew as "the Dell guy", I was
chortling like I hadn't chortled for some time.

And you put in some delightfully romantic stuff, too. Like Buffy's
ecstasy now that she told Willow the truth and her telling Willow she
could never hate her (all together: "awww!"). Oh and that part where
Jonathan turns on the Trio, and gets Andrew captured and then we find
out that Warren is working for something, that seems kind of familiar
for some reason. Reminds me of, oh, what's that called? Oh, yeah,
"plot movement", that's what it's called. Think you could teach ME
about that? :p

Love this, want more. (Like you can't tell?)

Dan