Re: FIC: Almost A Whisper (1/2)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

HD,

Ah, another in the "school's out, so back to the fic" crowd. Cool, I've
missed your work.

Hmm, so that snowstorm in "Amends" wasn't quite so providential, huh?
It can actually snow in Sunnydale...well, okay.

The contrast of Buffy bravely journeying through a deserted Sunnydale
and, later, crying alone in her room because she didn't know how to deal
with loving Willow was very well done. My heart felt for her.

A note that says "B", but uses Willow's "where the books live" line?
Interesting. Only two parts in this, so I'm guessing we don't have a
big Faith-digression in the plot, but I could be wrong.

Looking forward to reading part 2,

Dan

PS--small note: "Gingerbread" was only a week before "Helpless" (see
Willow's remark in the cafeteria about Buffy's birthday), but you made
it seem like the events took place longer ago than that. Just a minor
thing, but I'm picky that way. Sorry.