Re: FIC: Almost A Whisper (1/2)

["hd_genscher" <HD.Genscher@xxxxxx>]

--- In buffywantswillow@y..., danspector@w... wrote:
> Hmm, so that snowstorm in "Amends" wasn't quite so providential,
huh?
> It can actually snow in Sunnydale...well, okay.

Since that was a Buffy/Angel ep, it just didn't take place in my AU
(where Angel didn't come back). Should've made that clearer, maybe.

> PS small note: "Gingerbread" was only a week before "Helpless" (see
> Willow's remark in the cafeteria about Buffy's birthday), but you
made
> it seem like the events took place longer ago than that. Just a
minor
> thing, but I'm picky that way. Sorry.

Yep, I screwed that up. Just ignore the final "back then" in that
paragraph, it should work fine then. Sorry!

Thanks for the constructive criticism. Hope you'll enjoy the next
part. Coming soon, to a Buffy/Willow list near you...

Bye,

HD