Re: Fic; Bitter Business(1A/?)

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Um, 'Yoshi?

You know that Lorne isn't yellow, right? He's green. Really green.
Greener-than-the-Hulk green. So, perhaps you're looking for "Broccoli
Boy" if you want to hang an alliterative nickname on him. (And you may
want to adjust the color on your set...)

Eh, don't mind me; I'm just bitter that I sat on my "You're My Best
Friend" songfic idea for 10 months and now you've beaten me to it.
That's the way the procrastinator...okay, I can't find an appropriate
word starting with "p", but you get the picture.

As ever, loving the detail work, from the French Waffles to the proper
container for grapefruit juice. And the song itself was nicely
rendered.

Plus, Buffy pushing harder to find Tara the more she realizes that she
loves Willow; vey appropriate.

And isn't nice to just have a "nice" Angel/Buffy scene, angst-free? Too
few of those; good work.

On to 1b (as soon as I hunt it up, that is)

Dan