Re: Fic: Noticing 1/1 (by Arsenic)

["mudrat_26" <mudrat@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I really enjoyed this. It was different - no grave danger or big bad 
to deal with, no world ending apocalypse; just character interaction, 
everyday life - noticing the fine print instead of just reading the 
headline. And having finally seen the S6 final, I think this carries 
on nicely (the way I'd like to see it, anyway).

I like Dawn in this story - more mature; she and Buffy are relating 
better. And I love the way the trust issues between B/W are 
addressed. That's something Dan's brought up previously that I agree 
with - on the show there's an implied parallel between Willow going 
off the deep end and Angel turning evil. While Buffy never fully 
trusted Angel again, I'm hoping (soppy romantic that I am) that maybe 
she and Will can get past that and (eventually) regain trust. The 
way this story depicts them, it gives me hope.

Jenny, could you please encourage your friend to perhaps continue 
this? Or maybe contribute again in future?

cheers,
mudrat