Re: Fic: Noticing 1/1 (by Arsenic)

["amberbensonfan" <AmberBensonFan@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

This was a great story. It was very concise for one. But also, it 
didn't shove the "subtext" down your throat and it built slowly, but 
steadily so that you could easily take in everything as it was 
given. It also didn't seem rushed. "Awww, Tara's dead, by the way, 
I love you, let's go to bed." It wasn't like that and that's really 
great. It was also really nice to see a more "adult" version of B/W 
handling this. They lost their innocence during this season and 
though they were always a bit older beyond their years, this story 
really reflects the incredible jump Buffy and Willow specifically 
took this year.

This was very refreshing and lovely to read and I sure hope you keep 
up the awesome work. I'd love to read more.

Jude
MegaWitches
www.megawitches.net


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> Title: Noticing
> Author: Arsenic