Re: FIC: Aspects of Buffy Pt.1/?

["Will MaClay" <willntlover@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

> Especially liked the touch where, in this version, Willow completely misses 
> the
> cheerleaders spelling Percy's name. (Oh, poor Percy! He's "needy",
> after all <g>)


I really disliked it when Willow cheered for Percy. She was talking to 
Buffy!! Not that jerk.

> (Hmm, wonder how Buffy will talk Jonathan down here?not that, with no
> telepathy, she should even be looking for a killer, which probably means 
> bad things in regards to both Jonathan's suicide and the lunch lady's 
> lovely dose of rat poison :( But I just can't shake the image of Buffy 
> facing Jonathan in the tower and going "you think **you** have it bad...")

I haven't figured that part out yet. But i will, cuz I like Johnathan.


> PS?Benefits of proofreading, today's lesson:
>
> >Willow grabbed her back, flinging it over her shoulder.
>
> Yeoowwtch!! That's gotta hurt! ;)

Oops! Well see thanks for pointign that out to me. Now that means i can 
post the next part right now. Huess i'll have to go back and read it again 
::drools coz the next part has buffy and willow in bed:: oh well :grin:

Thanks for the feedback Dan. :)
-Will




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