Re: RoundRobin: Chapter 6 - RedWillow

[jeepy91@xxxxxxx]

Ohh, I see the Buffy/Tara element really starting to develop ;) Bonding over 
their mutual missage of Willow was nice. And Tara trying to help Buffy get 
herself a better job than at the Doublemeat was a nice touch. Considering 
the fact it is awfully conceivable that Buffy could have easily gotten a 
security guard position.

Like how you set it up, but not so blatant that it seemed pushy if that makes 
any sense. Nice work :)

Casandra
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Buffy:"I could wrestle naked in grease for a living and still be cleaner than 
after a shift at the Doublemeat."
Willow:"Plus, I'd visit you at work every single day."
-'Normal Again' Shooting Script