Re: FIC: Learning to live pt 16b

[JDMeans@xxxxxxx]

Interesting story so far. Mostly character interaction, I've noticed. Is 
there a Big Bad(or even a medium bad?) in the future?

I have only one real issue regarding this story, the relationship between 
Willow and Sara. Now, seperating this from my normal pro-Buffy/Willow bias, 
I have a problem with Willow becoming romantically involved with a woman who 
served as her psychiatrist. WIllow is still fragile from the events of 
'Seeing Red' to 'Grave', and as a professional councilor, Sara should 
maintain a professional distance. Somehow, taking Willow to bed doesn't 
strike me as a good idea for her. Let Willow more fully recover, then maybe. 
I also just noticed; Sara rhymes with Tara. Talk about transference! Who's 
next for Willow? Mara? Cara? Scarlett O'Hara?

Other than that, I have no complaints. Awaiting future chapters,
Kirayoshi