Re: FIC: Filling in the Gaps pt 1,2 & 3 NC-17

["mudrat_26" <mudrat@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Oh, you *so* have a talent for this.

I've been hanging for this since you posted the final part of 
TSIB..that's quite a while, BTW. Tease.

Love this story!! Now that they're finally together it's interesting 
to see the slight shift in the dynamic between them. Love that they 
still can't get enough of each other.

Good to see Tara moving on. Love your original characters, and they 
way they have (obviously) become close with Tara. I'd like to see a 
bit more of their history, though - how they met Tara, and how the 
relationship the 5 of them have moved from friendly to sexual. That 
doesn't just happen overnight, there has to be a great deal of trust 
for all parties - and it seems clear that this has been going on for 
a while (both from Tara's comfort with the situation but also, I 
thought, Willow's comment to Buffy, that Tara thought Will would know 
Claire, Casey, etc - perhaps from college?). The dynamic of this 
little group fascinates me - love the outright lust and voyeurism 
going on.

As for B/W and their close examination of the brickwork on the 
apartment block.....ooh damn. I should make myself a sign, with a 
warning about reading your fic....make sure I only read it in an 
appropriate place and at an appropriate time....like not at work, or 
when parent-type people are about to descend for a visit. Or just 
before dinner guests are supposed to arrive. This made me tingle in 
all the right places....which was bad enough, but then we move on to 
the display of voyeurism by the quintet in the bedroom......OK, 
shutting up now...

Great stuff, can't wait for the next part. Please don't leave us 
waiting too long....

cheers,
mudrat