Re: 'The Wish' (4/4) - PG-13 - Buffy/Willow

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Louise,

Lovely wrap-up, and still delightfully efficient. So, Draconian katras
for one don't work quite as well, huh? Faith on a rampage,
extra-motivated by her jealousy of Willow, and tragedy takes Buffy's
dream away. Painful to watch, but karmic justice. (And btw, a lesson
to the slayer that the proper advice in that sitch is not "stay behind
me", but "Willow, run!") Cool.

The end, whether it's an unwishing or all just a dream, works well.
Willow is alive, all is right with world--except for the hole in
Buffy's heart, to actually know what she could have had, and to have it
taken away. Ouch.

More! More! And, oh, yes--more!

Dan