Fwd: Re: [SUFic] FIC: Roomies (1/4) Buffy/Willow, NC-17

[danspector@xxxxxxxxx]

Well, I got so excited at getting my hands on a repost of FC's fic that
I totally screwed up and sent my feedback to the list she reposted it
on, rather than here as I intended. (What makes it worse is that the
other list is a no-feedback list; I'm expecting a well-deserved
ass-kicking.)

Another consequence of my screwup is that now I can only send that
feedback to this list in attachment form. Apologies all around for the
inconvenience.

Dan

currently awaiting the arrival of his new brain in the mail, since
clearly his current one has gone past its warranty.

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• To: SUFic@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
• Subject: Re: [SUFic] FIC: Roomies (1/4) Buffy/Willow, NC-17
• From: danspector@xxxxxxxxx (Dan Spector)
• Date: Wed, 9 Oct 2002 20:52:26 -0700 (PDT)
• In-reply-to: "faithful_chickie" <faithful_chickie@yahoo.com>'s message of Thu, 10 Oct 2002 03:10:22 -0000

[Ah, reposty goodness! Now that I have all four chapters without having
to hunt out the missing parts, I can give FC the FB her wonderful
prolificness deserves. Cool.]

FC,

Nice start. Loved how you played up the shippyness of the intimate
situations: the sucking of the finger, the little peck, the
handholding--all the things that are minor until you have to have
someone in your space 24/7 and constantly connected to your life.
Willow has no place in her world that is free of Buffy now, no way to
dodge the emotions that Buffy stirs in her.  

(Actually, I sometimes feel that's exactly why Buffy didn't room with
her to start--with Angel gone, Buffy was having much more trouble
denying her feelings. Heck, she didn't even pick out her classes until
very late, because that would have required too much time with Willow.
["Slay-heavy summer", my eye :p]) 

Plus, now every time Willow get dressed, she'll be brushing up against
Buffy's panties. And sometimes she'll touch the ones in the drawer,
too... <g>

Off to part 2,

Dan

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