Re: FB: Bitter Business 2

[JDMeans@xxxxxxx]

In a message dated 1/27/2003 9:41:17 PM Pacific Standard Time, 
mcronin24@xxxxxxxxx writes:

> I've been an admirer of your stories for some time now including 
> Defenders of the Night.
> I have been eagerly anticipating this chapter but after reading the 
> fight between Buffy and Spike, I'm left with a sour feeling and not 
> because Buffy is in trouble. The problem I have is that the fight 
> between Buffy and Spike lacked credibility.
> Your description of why Spike got the upper hand on Buffy sounded 
> like something the ME writing staff would come up with.

Truth be known, I kinda rushed through the fight scene. Fight scenes are, 
sadly, my main weakness in writing. I just wanted to finish this chapter and 
post it. I may consider rewriting it later though.

Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate any advice on the subject.

Kirayoshi