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Re: FF: A Moment - Revised



Very enjoyable, Conner. Just as sweet the second time around.

One suggestion, though; referring to 'Spike' in Heaven, shouldn't you call 
him William, his human name before being turned? Nice touch referring to 
Spike's imminent receiving of a soul down the road.

Kirayoshi


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