Re: FIC: Cold reunion 3/?

[Susan Carr <skeeter451@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Wow! That was really good Jen. I'm really liking the way this story is shaping up. Not sure where the relationships are going, but I'm looking forward to adding it to my sites if I may?
Useful feedback time...In this, Willow has been through a lot of pain and is a much different person than when she was, but I see her interactions with Dawn as the start of her healing process. I don't think she'll ever be the way she was, but I think she can change and mature into the woman she would have become had not all the bad stuff happened to her. The process of her getting from here to there is the story. Change through conflict is what makes a great story. This one has so much potential to be just that.
Great job!
--->Susan

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jend1205 <jend1205@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:Ok this part is a little lighter. I'm really not sure about this one. 
I really need some opinions good or bad. It just kept rolling around 
and it wouldn't stop. My ex has been reading it for me and changing a 
few things but I just don't know. Come I can take it, hell I think I 
can take anything at this point. Jen

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