Re: Fic: The Connection 6/?

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daenerys,

Touching stuff with the reunion between B/W. Good descriptions on the
battles, but I don't buy Buffy offering her head to Mikhailovitch just
for his promise to spare Willow. Not only is she depending on the word
of an utter monster, but her death would leave Willow vulnerable to
whatever else was out there. I'm much more likely to see Buffy reacting
to that sort of threat with a "you even **think** about hurting Willow,
and I'm gonna hack you into little bitty pieces" attitude.

Other than that, though, good stuff. Glad you've got the kinks worked
out, and I look forward to more.

Dan