Re: Fic: help with Don't Know The Title Yet

["Patrick Sanders" <rsand21266@xxxxxxxxx>]

--- In buffywantswillow@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, "fritolays11" 
<fritolays11@h...> wrote:
> I have ideas om where i want to go with this story but i'm having a 
> hard time putting them together. Would anyone care to help me 
write 
> this story? Marie

This is the best I can help right now:

How's about "Yellow Tie" as the title? It's nice to have a "just 
vampire" as the Big Bad again.

I'll go away now,

Patrick

"Will?are you asleep?" I heard the soft sound of her voice 
behind me. She was finished already.

I take a breath to compose myself. "I can't sleep." I say in shaky 
voice.

"Why?" She asked concerned.

"Because? I miss the sound of your heartbeat too much." I let 
out with a small whimper.