Re: FF: Love Immortal 5/7

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David,

Great stuff! (I've been waiting for someone to pick up on the subtext
in Cordy's line from "Passion"! "Two's company, three's...not", indeed!
Wonder which one she's jealous of... <g>) I loved Joyce thinking "Time
for denial!" and I don't know how Buffy kept from kissing Willow in the
bedroom. (Okay, I do know--it's because you're evil.)

More importantly, I dig how you let the changes you've to Joyce and
Jenny's pasts inform the characters as we know them. The Angelus/Joyce
scene plays so differently with Joyce knowing who and what he is. And
good flashback with Jenna in Borsa a century ago.

Also, liked the bit with Giles picking up Joyce's groceries, and the
restoration of the cut line about Grandma...

More!  

Dan