Feedback for Off Course, Scenes, Touch & Red-Headed

[Alex <pga1ht@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

CDS - Glad to see you continuing this. I really enjoy the way you write Anya - the conversation she had with Dawn was priceless. Hope to see more soon! 

Jen - Interesting twists, Buffy not knowing she's a potential, and Will seeming to be somewhat skeptical of magic. I'm very curious as to where this will go. 

BHV - Whoa - Xander unleashes on Buffy! A well-written scene, and he said some things she needed to hear. As always, a very nice part - very much looking forward to more. 

Kimber - A very nice start. I think you've captured the characters well - this is a totally believible situation. I'm anxious to see where things lead. 

To all of you; thanks for sharing with us and keep up the good work. 

Alex 
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